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  1. Banespawn

    Alternatives to "casting a spell"

    Why not just write "He drew the shadows to him." Just cut the rest. You don't need it.
  2. Are these your protagonists? What are they trying to accomplish? Rather than focus on what happens to them, try focusing on what they do to take control of their situation.
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